[ Personal Critique Thread ]

Am I doing it wrong? Did I suspend reality (and characterization) a little too much, even for Poly?

I'm not the perfect roleplayer, and I've never claimed to be, but I would like to do the best that I can so that everyone can have the best experience possible.

In light of that, a critique thread! Feel free to use it. Comments are screened, so really, say what you want, however you want, and so forth.

Wuv. ♥

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I think that tonight is a Peking duck night, clearly.

But here's the big kicker.

Does it still count as cannibalism?

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I've never seen a transmitter like this one, but my other one isn't getting a signal at all, so.

[ slow inhale, followed by a long exhale: smoking is bad, kids ]

...I think I've set this to the right channel— Jet, you there?

Well.

[ this is followed by sounds of a racer spaceship getting dents in the side ]

Most — things — get — better — when I — kick them — so...

[ more clangs; poor Swordfish ]